Time to finish the story; same response format as usual:
T = Tell me something about what you just read
EX = What was most exciting?
T = Try to understand better by asking a question about what you read
Y = How does this connect to you?
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i read about how amercan donuts oppend and badly hurt marrtys bussins. and the girl is going back to callage. it was exciting when they where about to try the dounots at amercans dounuts. why do they serve douts to you? It connect to me because i love donuts!
ReplyDeleteAlex coppied mine every thing was what i was thinking
ReplyDeleteT: American donuts opened and packed a punch in Marty's donuts.
ReplyDeleteEX: The "exciting" part was when she left to go back to school.
T: Whenever she was about to go back to school something always stopped her. What was it?
Y: like alex said i do love donuts
Hi. (T) Lois and the narrator start to focus on the competition, "American Donut". They go "undercover" to see what it's like. They see a few of their own regulars at "American Donut" when they finish they know they are beat. Lois tells the narrator to go back to college. The narrator ends up back in college. She checks out Marty's website which brings us back to the picture. (EX) I love donuts and I am now hungry for one. (T) What happens to Lois? (Y) I know how it feels to know you are beat but you haven't lost yet.
ReplyDeleteHey, its Jere
ReplyDeleteT, "american doughnut" opened up and gave marys's some comptition.
Ex, louis and the nararater go undercover to try out their oponents dounuts
T, what is the furture of the donut buisness
Y, I also know how it feels to be beated but haven't lost yet.
T:lois and the narrator go to Marty's donuts rival American donuts.the narrator went back to school.E the narrator went back to school.T did martys donuts close. Y i really dont know how this relats to me but if i had to chose something i would chose that i know what it is like to have a better aponint then my self when i worked for some family at a clothing store.
ReplyDeletet they were next to a wal-mart tcby rental place and movie place
ReplyDeleteex when they went undercover
t i dont have any time to relate
y
T The main character goes to the rival donut shop and to see how they are doing. they are doing very well. EX When they went under cover to the rival shop. T I don't know what to ask. Y I think i know how it feels when you know it is time to move on.
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ReplyDeleteT = Lois takes the narrator to American Donuts to check out the competition.
ReplyDeleteEX = It was the most exiting when they ordered the donuts.
T = What did the donuts taste like?
Y = I LIKE DONUTS!
lois got her computer and looked up marty's doughtnuts and marty was not relly smileing
ReplyDeletethat marty's doughtnuts has not went out of buisness yet with the new doughtnuts shop
when will marty even look at his web site
this short story relate to me by i love doughtnuts and I think that marty's would be a great place to get doughtnuts
t ameican donut opend
ReplyDeleteex nothing
t did martys make it
y nothing
(T) Matry's doughnuts goes online to get more costumers.
ReplyDelete(EX) Was when we found ou that Jay could swim but not float.
(T) Why does he have a crush on Ingris.
(Y) The way it relates to me is that one time i had a crush on a girl and i found out that she and another was dating.