This is Riley
T the narator just got his wish because he gets to work the late shift with the girl of his dreams.
EX i think it is exciting that he gets to work with the girl of his dreams
T i dont have a question
Y i can relate because i would like to work the late shift with the girl of my dreams
David G.
(T) Jay is working at Marty's Doughnuts and finds a girl ther named ingris.
(EX) When Jay gets to go float in the lake with Ingris.
(T) Why did Ingris run off with Marty.
(Y) It relates to me because I had a crush on a girl and when i found out that she was datin another guy i was crushed.
Jake
T: Jay is working at marty's donuts.
EX: The exciting part is when he finally tries to talk to ingrid.
T: Why didn't he talk to her before.
Y: This connects to me because as i said before i love donuts.
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Josh
ReplyDelete(T)- i think this is the second narrator writing now and that the new narrator can not swim at the lake where everyone is.
(EX)- The new narrator is a cook at marty's doughnuts and marty's is right in between the highway and the big lake.
(T)- Is this a new narrator.
(Y)- my house is by a big lake.
(T)- i think this is the second narrator writing now and that the new narrator can not swim at the lake where everyone is.
(EX)- The new narrator is a cook at marty's doughnuts and marty's is right in between the highway and the big lake.
(T)- Is this a new narrator.
(Y)- my house is by a big lake.
Brandon
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t american donuts secne
i thought i make that clear
t the common costomors are high scool kids instead of seinors
ex he has a love intrest
t why did he not try to pratice a little more
y i can swim