Monday, August 31, 2009

Twice Told: Finishing "Floater"

Riley

T the main character is sad because ingrid the girl he was really starting to like left town with Marty

EX i think that it is exciting that he learded to flote.

T Did marty and Ingred realy have something thing going on between them

Y this comects to me because i know how it feels when the girl you like is suddenly gone.

David A
(T) Ingrid and Jay are now on the same shift. Ingrid offers to teach Jay how to swim. (EX) I love swimming. (T) Why did Ingrid go with Marty? (Y) I have had this happen to me.

Nick
TJay got a shift with ingrid ex jay got offerd swimming lessons by ingrid T what happed to marty ? Y i have no idea how this rellats to me at all

Jake
T: Jay talked about ridiculous things with ingrid
EX: The most exciting part was when ingrid disappeared with marty
T: Why did Ingrid go with Marty
Y: This does not connect to me in anyway


Josh
(T)- when she whent up to the window she was smuthered by guys with chains around there neck and six-pack abs.

(EX)- That the narrator whent to the lake at night when everone was gone.

(T)- Will the narator ever go into the lake in the day time with everone else.

(Y)- When the people go swimming in the lake I also like to swim in lakes and rivers.

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