Monday, October 19, 2009
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YAY 1ST COMMENT:)
ReplyDelete(T)they were lifting a very heavy rock
(EX) that they could lift a heavy rock of that size
(T) why would they lift a rock of that size
(Y)I Tried To Pick Up A Haevy Rock One But Dropped It On My Foot
T: jacks tribe tried to kill ralph
ReplyDeleteEX: THEY GOT RESCUED BUT I DONT THINK JACK SHOULD BE RESCUED
T: why is jack so stupid
Y: this relates to me because i have been rescued before
T the saviges set the island on fire
ReplyDeleteEX they got rescude
T what happend to jack
Y i have never been rescued from an island
T they hunt ralph
ReplyDeleteEX they where rescued
T what took so long?
Y i have been hunting
(T) They get rescued.
ReplyDelete(EX) They try an kill Ralph.
(T) Why would you kill Ralph.
(Y) I have been saved before.
t-they tell the offacer some of what happend
ReplyDeleteex-whan ralf sees the navy seel
t- what will happen to the boys next?
y-i have been saved before.
Broncos 6-0!
T. Ralph wakes up to the crashing of Rocks and then goes into hideing. Jack and co. spred out and try to find him, Jack setting fire to the jungle in an attempt to flush him out. Later, then they are chaseing RAplh down the beach, they run into a naval officer, who saw the smoke that was comeing up from the smoldering forrest, and htey get rescued.
ReplyDeleteEX. RAlph beating the crap out of one of the savages.
T. What now?
Y. I've been fighitng for my life before, not in real life, in my games though
on a side note, i would have had it end with Jack and the savages attacking the navy, and then getting mowed down by machine gun fire, leaveing Raph, and samneric alive
sorry about the spelling mistakes of the above post, spell check didn't kick in until after i hit post
ReplyDeleteT jack tryed to kill ralfe
ReplyDeleteEX they get rescued
T will piggy live again
Y I have been rescued
T they are going to kill Ralph
ReplyDeleteEx they get recued
T why was no one punished
Y nothing
(T) They torch the island and try to kill Ralph. (EX) They are rescued. (T) Why does Jack finally come to his senses? (Y) I have been self-conscious.
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